You didn’t edit the article properly. Don’t include a story cover and do not use “I” so much. Talk about the game, not only what you think about it. This is due soon if you need more specific help, ask me!
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ashleym2008 // March 20, 2008 at 5:34 pm
You didn’t edit the article properly. Don’t include a story cover and do not use “I” so much. Talk about the game, not only what you think about it. This is due soon if you need more specific help, ask me!
hitides // April 14, 2008 at 4:01 pm
Where is your planner?
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